by Lunatic Drache » Sunday August 21, 2011 6:13 am
lol bump
I'd be lying if I said this translation wasn't at all influenced by others. I might have cheated on one line because I could not make any sense of it on my own.
There are still aspects that bug me, but I'm overall happy with it. I played with some dual meanings in a few places. I like my last one the best.
Also, that line with Phantasmagoria and Rhaplanca made me want to screaaaaaam.
Was guwo ga endia yora omnis, grow en envied gyas
knawa yora dest manaf.
Was yant ga guatrz
yorra ruinie en stel art yora dsier deata art alroetsue.
Sinful children, know this well:
This is the end.
Horrifying children,
pay the ultimate price for mutilating me.
Rrha ki ga chs cause mea.
Rrha i ga dople en gott denera.
Rrha ki ga chs fayra mea nozess yora omnis.
I’ll become a curse
to purge the evils that plague me.
I’ll become the inferno that engulfs you.
Was quel ga ini, accrroad sos yora
pauwel, quesa, viega zespa yora,
zodaw, nozess, ftt en slep yanje,
sos valwa, sos futare, sos near, sos waath.
I’ll smite you with
crushing forces, raging storms, rending blades,
extinction, eviction, evanescence and eternal slumber,
for purification, for the future, for life, for rebirth.
zodaw, zodaw, zodaw, zodaw iem.
nozess, nozess, nozess, nozess iem.
endia, endia, endia, endia iem.
deata, deata, deata, deata iem.
Die, die, die now.
Depart, depart, depart now.
Perish, perish, perish now.
Suffer, suffer, suffer now.
Was ki ga wis hymmnos mea endia.
Was ki ga wis hymmnos mea slep.
I am the song of the end.
I am the song of slumber.
Was ki ga chs hymmnos mea nozess iem.
I will become the song of departure.
manaf, titilia infel mea,
accrroad mea, dor en near crannidare murfanare.
Ma num wa clalliss mea dea sacra yora rudje,
soa wis li werllra mea, soa wis la amyure mea.
My beloved children,
I gave you my all, body and soul.
Now I must stain myself red with your blood,
This is my sorrow, my repentance.
gyaje, titilia grow yora,
synk en synk orviclle mean chs didalia.
Ma zweie wa kil omnis yora,
soa wiz werllra mea, amyure mea, eta omnis yora.
My insolent brats,
Your sins piled up and completely overwhelmed me.
Now I must kill you,
This is my sorrow, my repentance, your burial.
"Zaarn, plina, zarle, milra yeeel"
“Swelling oceans, lush verdure, gentle rain; all nostalgic scents”
Yeeel, Was yea ra weal yorr toe titilia mahin en jambea won mea.
infel, yorr memora?
wharn wis dor sos yora spitze
Long ago, I proudly watched as you took your first tiny steps
Remember, my darlings?
My arms, the vast land, held and raised you.
Was nyasri ga nozess en kil yora
sos waath, sos futare
Yet now is the time for severance.
For rebirth, for the future.
Den dest phantasmagoria en rhaplanca ides,
Mea wis rooshellan, nnoini roon en endia vale.
Coall inna mea.
That paradise is now illusion, its gardens fruitless,
I am the cradle, your first refuge, and it’s time to lay you to rest.
Return to my depths.