Ar tonelico: An Ordinary Life - The visual novel

[Dexas]

Based off the original epic fan fiction: Ar tonelico: An Ordinary Life, comes the visual novel version!

It's like picking up a good book. You never really want to put it down.

]It is among the greatest works of literature, and also of art, I've ever, and will ever, read, watch, and enjoy. I doubt there will ever be another story as dramatic and touching as yours.

... ... my mouth is shut...i cant find anything in English vocabulary to describe my feelings for this video...its...

This fic was one of the best ones I have ever read, and you did an excellent job on all the fronts of the story. Thanks for writing such an epic fic, and I hope to see another of your works of art someday...

Best emotionalgleeexcitement overload I've ever had.

There's just too much overall win for me to comment on anything specific.

This is really EPIC! I don't know any other words to describe what I've seen.

DAMN SON!

MUST...HAVE!! *downloads*

I will through everything to get it~!!!~~Must *really* must have it~!!!~~Moo~~!

this fanfic is beyond awesome !

your story is marvelous

Are you some god???!!!! I've read quite a lot of fanfic for a decade and all I can say about this awesome fanfic you wrote here is a truly masterpiece and it is very original!!!

Rrha paks ra vit sor!

Chapters 1-5: http://wizzardx.isisview.org/vn/AnOrdinaryLifeCh1-5.zip

Update: You find newer versions of the game on the wiki, here.

[Dexas]

Here comes the visual novel~nya! Depending on how many people comments, we may or may not be motivated to work hard on the next chapter, so please give lots of feedback~nya!

[Linearis]

"Oh, how interesting~nya!"

[Eleinia]

Yay! I can find play the last 3 chapters!

[Dexas]

Yay! I can find play the last 3 chapters!

uhm, it's the "next three" chapters~nya. There's a LOT, LOT more to go.

[Eleinia]

Yay! I can find play the last 3 chapters!

uhm, it's the "next three" chapters~nya. There's a LOT, LOT more to go.

Oh, I didn't know that, since I kept hearing wizzardx mentioned he was working on 3-5, so I thought there were only 5. In that case, I look forward to the remaining.

[Utsuho Lazy]

Yay, first five chapters are finally here!

Yay! I can find play the last 3 chapters!

uhm, it's the "next three" chapters~nya. There's a LOT, LOT more to go.

Yup, a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT more to go.

[Eleinia]

Yay, first five chapters are finally here!

Yay! I can find play the last 3 chapters!

uhm, it's the "next three" chapters~nya. There's a LOT, LOT more to go.

Yup, a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT more to go.

Now I'm depressed because I won't be able to play the rest soon.
Gotta go find the original script. Has it been reposted/linked on this forum?

[aquagon]

It's on here:

http://oldarm.isisview.org/ar-tonelico- ... -t395.html

Pretty good read, though very long as well.

[虚偽の幻影]

must.download.it.now.!*wiggles around*

[Palsa]

The graphics were put together rather well, its very similar to that of the original game. ^_^
I look forward to seeing these through to the end!!

[wizzardx]

Thanks for posting this Dexas

It's finally done, even though I didn't have time to add everything I wanted to. Dexas might post an update later with a few extras I've been working on. I'll probably start work on chapter 6 in a week or two. There's a few other forum-related projects I want to work on before then (extras for ch1-5, a few game data ripping-related projects, a singing reyvateil desktop app, and a couple of other things).

It will probably be about 1-2 months before the game for chapters 6-10 is released, and that also depends on your feedback and how much demand there is for it . Each chapter takes about a week, and the later chapters get longer and have more complicated sequences (eg: chapter 5 has a fighting scene that I need to put into the game and do some kind of animation for).

Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed the first 5-game installment Look forwards to the extras for ch1-5 a bit later (assuming Dexas is ok with them )

And, a big thanks to Dexas and Deci for their help with this project You guys have been awesome.

[ilutiern]

Shun-sama is such a hard worker. ;__; sorry for all of the procrastination, Dexas.

I'm looking forward to playing the games, which I haven't had the chance to do yet. Then maybe I'll find out what the heck I'm doing. (thumbs up)

[虚偽の幻影]

its really good!!! i especially like the part when the main shoves both bentos to the mouth, then jakuri was moving both flasg up to the air and say a tie.XD its such a cute imaginating it~

[L-Voss]

I haven't read the original, but the VN version is really great! Can't wait for more~ ^_^

[Goober]

It stopped...in the middle...of an important scene...

*cry*



Great job so far though. It's nice to have the music there. When I read through it on oldARM, some of the youtube links were all broken; no need to worry about that now!

[Dexas]

It stopped...in the middle...of an important scene...

*cry*

Well get used to it, because every chapter ends in a cliffhanger~nya. That's how I keep the audience interested and wanting more.

[Goober]

It stopped...in the middle...of an important scene...

*cry*

Well get used to it, because every chapter ends in a cliffhanger~nya. That's how I keep the audience interested and wanting more.

I never said it was bad, just that I was getting into it and suddenly *BAM* "To be Continued"

It's actually a really good way to keep people coming back for more.


Though, I was kinda spoiled with the original since I came in after the entire thing had been written.

[Eijigawa]

Ahhhh...... the best ar tonelico fanfic is being VN-fied~degozaru.

Maybe I'll wait for the complete version instead~degozaru.

[Dexas]

Ahhhh...... the best ar tonelico fanfic is being VN-fied~degozaru.

Maybe I'll wait for the complete version instead~degozaru.

You're going to be waiting for a very, very long time then~nya