[asa+kari] reyvateil creation> feedback?+extra illust

[KiloTango]

Wow, this is looking fantastic!

[asa+kari]

:shockblink3:
Are you... a professional artist by chance?
You're really good.

Thank you very much! No, I'm not a professional (yet?) and there's many indications on the illustration that points otherwise. The most I've done 'professionally' are mostly through commissions.. if that counts haha.

Anyway.. thank you very much. This uplifts me quite a bit so I hope the final result of this picture comes out far nicer!

Wow, this is looking fantastic!

Thank you! oAo

[Palsa]

Looking nice! ^_^
As for the background. . . hmm. . . How about birds in flight or, a field?
. . . I know, I really can't think of anything. . .
Gomen.

[asa+kari]

I finished~? :'D

You can see a larger version here here.
And the full size is 2650x4650. xD; I think it's the biggest canvas I've worked on so far.

[Palsa]

It looks extremely beautiful, well done! ^_^
(Adds to favorites on dA).

[Utsuho Lazy]

*Drops by*

That was a really beautiful work~ Too bad that I don't get to see the left girl's face... /shot

[ilutiern]

Ooh, looks so lovely The different colors makes it look so vibrant~
DO WANT the girl facing the right's clothes

[asa+kari]

It looks extremely beautiful, well done! ^_^
(Adds to favorites on dA).

Thank you Palsa~!
ahh I hope I can develop these characters further soon. ;A; They waited patiently for so many months and they still don't have names orz.

*Drops by*

That was a really beautiful work~ Too bad that I don't get to see the left girl's face... /shot

Thank you very much! Hehe, to remedy that, I started a drawing (later to be colored, but still with sketchy lineart) of her face and perhaps a mock up of the front of her design~ ^^

Ooh, looks so lovely The different colors makes it look so vibrant~
DO WANT the girl facing the right's clothes

Thank you! The colors came out much more vibrant than I thought. I thought that the colors I used were a bit bland so I adjusted some of it a bit (along with using more brighter hues) so it ended up becoming another illustration with one of my typical coloring styles haha.

And I'm happy to hear that you like her outfit! oAo Her outfit was difficult to work it because it was pretty random and composed of random and common elements I tend to draw.

[cathurz]

A..a..an amazing fantastic drawing,it made me spaceout in awhile

i still can't believes you're not profesional

[asa+kari]

:o
A..a..an amazing fantastic drawing,it made me spaceout in awhile

i still can't believes you're not profesional

T-thank you so much! I'm flattered that you think my work is professional-quality. ;A;
I personally don't think I'm there yet.. but I will continue to create new works regardless so please look forward to them whenever you can.


And thank you everyone for the support~ the comments you post in this thread has been very encouraging~!

[Palsa]

Here is a list of possible names that I gathered for your characters:
Note, that you can always combined several small names into one, or modify the name by changing the letters.

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[Older sister]

SHURA:
1. Hebrew: (שׁוּרָה): name meaning "row, line."
2. Short form of Russian unisex Sashura (Шура), meaning "defender of mankind."

AIYANA:
This name was coined by professor Bryan Sykes, author of The Seven Daughters of Eve, for a particular Native American genetic line, one of four reconstructed mtDNA lines believed to have colonised America. The name was adopted into English usage, mostly by Americans. It may mean "ever-blooming."

RIYA:
(रिया): Hindi name meaning "singer."

LINNAEA:
From the Latin name for the "twin flower." Named after the botanist Linnaeus, because it was his favorite plant.

JARONA:
Anglicized form of Hebrew Yarona, meaning "to shout and sing."

ZAMIRA:
Feminine form of Albanian Zamir, meaning "good voice."

[Younger sister]

SHIRA:
(שִׁירָה): Hebrew name meaning "song."

SHIRI:
(שִׁירָי): Hebrew name meaning "my song."

SAKIKO:
(咲子): Japanese name meaning "blossoming child; earlier child."

[Client]

ALYSA:
Variant spelling of English Alyssa, meaning either "noble sort" or "alyssum flower."

CALANDRA:
Italian surname transferred to forename use, meaning "skylark." This name may have originally been a byname for someone with a good singing voice.

EUMELIA:
(Ευμελια): Ancient Greek name derived from the word eumeleia, meaning "melody."

LYRICA:
Modern English name derived from Latin lyrica "lyric poem," from French lyrique "short poem expressing personal emotion," from Latin lyricus "of or for the lyre," from Greek lyrikos "singing to the lyre."
(This can probably be used as a sir or middle name, or you can use it with another name, like I did with Elirica. ^_^ )

LILURA:
Basque name meaning "enchantment."

AMATERASU:
(天照): Japanese name composed of the elements ama "heaven, sky" and terasu "to shine," hence "shining over heaven." In mythology, this is the name of a sun goddess who rules the heavens.
(I actually used this one for the name of the highlands level in my game, for rather obvious reasons.
Though this is probably too large for a first name, so I figured you might be able to use it as a sir name.)

[Any of the three]

AMAYA:
1. Japanese name meaning "night rain."
2. Variant spelling of Basque Amaia, meaning "the end."

PARISA:
(پریسا): Persian name meaning either "angelic" or "like a fairy."

ANIELA:
Polish form of Latin Angela, meaning "angel, messenger."

RAISA:
(רֵייזָא): Yiddish name meaning "rose." Compare with other forms of Raisa.

MALI:
Thai flower name meaning "jasmine."

RINA:
1. Short form of Roman Latin Marina, meaning "of the sea."
2. Short form of various Anglicized forms of Irish Ríona, meaning "pure."
3. Variant spelling of Hebrew unisex Rinnah, meaning "shouting for joy."

LANI:
Hawaiian name meaning "heaven, sky."

LUANA:
Hawaiian name meaning "to be at leisure." This name was used in the 1932 American film "The Bird of Paradise."

ELYSIA:
(Ἠλύσια): From Greek Pedion Elysion, the name of the heavenly fields of Elysia, a section of the Underworld mentioned in Greek mythology. The mythological place name may have evolved from the designation of a place, or person, struck by lightning (enelysion, enelysios); if so, the name means "lightning-struck."

AIKA:
(愛佳): Japanese name meaning "love song."

DAINA:
Lithuanian name meaning "song."

LYRA:
English name derived from the constellation name, meaning "lyre."

HERMINA:
The girl's name Hermina \he-rmi-na, her-mina\ is a variant of Herminia (Spanish) and Hermione (Greek), and the meaning of Hermina is "messenger; earthly".

I found most of these here:
http://www.20000-names.com/

And the last one here:
http://www.thinkbabynames.com/

[Saori]

Oh~! Your art style is so cute > u <
I really like the your color choices. So pastel-y and vibrant

[asa+kari]

Here is a list of possible names that I gathered for your characters:
Note, that you can always combined several small names into one, or modify the name by changing the letters.

Wow.. that's a massive list~ Thank you very much for your suggestions! I'm sure these will inspire a variation or some sort of names thanks to your suggestions~

Oh, and I'm sorry for not returning to the chat after leaving ;;. I got distracted and had managed to put off studying till minutes before bedtime. I have a bad habit of stalling when I get anxious about major tests orz. I hope to talk to you again soon though. ^^

Oh~! Your art style is so cute > u <
I really like the your color choices. So pastel-y and vibrant

Thank you Saori~! No matter what I do (and I kind of tried but..).. pastel and vibrancy are what I'm good (and familiar) at. xD

[Saori]

Thank you Saori~! No matter what I do (and I kind of tried but..).. pastel and vibrancy are what I'm good (and familiar) at. xD

There's nothing wrong with sticking to that and honing it even further. It gives your pictures a nice soft, yet metallic feel ' u '

[Fräulein Lillie]

Ah, pastels are what I like most to see...my, the finished product is great, asa+kari. I love how it glows, and give a warm, almost nostalgic feel...well, that's how it is with me. I'm weird like that, ahah, but yeah, I hope to see more in the future. I also see you're dabbing into creating a Reyvateil. I'm not much of use, but feel free to ask me for help.

[Palsa]

Here is a list of possible names that I gathered for your characters:
Note, that you can always combined several small names into one, or modify the name by changing the letters.

Wow.. that's a massive list~ Thank you very much for your suggestions! I'm sure these will inspire a variation or some sort of names thanks to your suggestions~

Oh, and I'm sorry for not returning to the chat after leaving ;;. I got distracted and had managed to put off studying till minutes before bedtime. I have a bad habit of stalling when I get anxious about major tests orz. I hope to talk to you again soon though. ^^

No problem, hope it helps. ^_^

Don't worry about it. ^_^

[asa+kari]

Thank you Saori~! No matter what I do (and I kind of tried but..).. pastel and vibrancy are what I'm good (and familiar) at. xD

There's nothing wrong with sticking to that and honing it even further. It gives your pictures a nice soft, yet metallic feel ' u '

I guess so~ owo
And metallic? That's interesting~ that's a first for that coloring style~

Ah, pastels are what I like most to see...my, the finished product is great, asa+kari. I love how it glows, and give a warm, almost nostalgic feel...well, that's how it is with me. I'm weird like that, ahah, but yeah, I hope to see more in the future. I also see you're dabbing into creating a Reyvateil. I'm not much of use, but feel free to ask me for help.

Thank you very much! And you're not weird for thinking that way (I mean, that could have been one of my initial, but.. kind-of-forgotten reasons for implementing this style more into my recently works).

And thank you for allowing me to rely on you!

Here is a list of possible names that I gathered for your characters:
Note, that you can always combined several small names into one, or modify the name by changing the letters.

Wow.. that's a massive list~ Thank you very much for your suggestions! I'm sure these will inspire a variation or some sort of names thanks to your suggestions~

Oh, and I'm sorry for not returning to the chat after leaving ;;. I got distracted and had managed to put off studying till minutes before bedtime. I have a bad habit of stalling when I get anxious about major tests orz. I hope to talk to you again soon though. ^^

No problem, hope it helps. ^_^

Don't worry about it. ^_^

And that's good~ I still can't help but feel awkward that I've never returned even though I said I would orz.

I hope I can narrow down my choice of names soon... but attempting to study for my tests this week comes first. D:

[asa+kari]

.. her name isn't final so don't mind it. 8D;
I'm still trying to find a name that feels right and this one doesn't quite fit yet.

Anyway... here is her face and the frontal view of her design (albeit a chibi lol)~

[Utsuho Lazy]

Anyway... here is her face and the frontal view of her design (albeit a chibi lol)~

She is so cute!

/tries to kidnap the chibi form

[Palsa]

Looks awesome, great work! ^_^